When you are writing a story you have to be very consistent using VERBAL TENSES. They are often in the PAST ( Past simple or continuouous, Present Perfect, Past Perfect, Modals in the PAST) You may introduce direct speech: Something someone said. And that would enrich your story and change the verbal tense. JUST BE CONSISTENT. REVISE EVERYTHING WHEN YOU HAVE FINISHED YOUR WRITING I post an example with the mistakes in bold, can you correct it? Post corrections please! I am just posting one but could have posted many more! WE NEED TO LEARN FROM OUR MISTAKES Barbara just couldn’t stop similing because in a few hours she was going to take a trip to France, Barbara ha ve always wanted to be a photographer and that’s why she was going to travel to France because there she could probably achieve her goal. When she was traveling to France she meet a famous photographer and Barbara decid e to show him her pictures, at first the famous photographer didn’t look impress i...