WRITING A STORY

When you are writing a story you have to be very consistent using VERBAL TENSES. 

They are often in the PAST ( Past simple or continuouous, Present Perfect, Past Perfect, Modals in the PAST)

You may introduce direct speech: Something someone said. And that would enrich your story and change the verbal tense.

JUST BE CONSISTENT.

REVISE EVERYTHING WHEN YOU HAVE FINISHED YOUR WRITING

I post an example with the mistakes in bold, can you correct it? Post corrections please!

I am just posting one but could have posted many more! WE NEED TO LEARN FROM OUR MISTAKES

Barbara just couldn’t stop similing because in a few hours she was going to take a trip to
France, Barbara have always wanted to be a photographer and that’s why she was going to
travel to France because there she could probably achieve her goal.
When she was traveling to France she meet a famous photographer and Barbara decide to
show him her pictures, at first the famous photographer didn’t look impressive but later he
decided to give Barbara an opportunity and hire her at his photography company that was a
very well known company.
Barbara work hard and make wonderful photos in France, she decide to travel all over the
world making photos, in a few years she became one of the best photographers in the world
and create a big company called Photo & travel were she hired young talents that wanted to
be photographers in the future. Barbara will never forget the day she travel to France because
that day was probably the best day in her life.