Pay attention when using agree: WE MUST SAY: I agree, I don't agree. Never think in spanish and introduce the verb to be My father is not agree you should have written My father DOES not agree.
You need to pay attention to maintain singular or plural If the subject is in the plural the verb must follow the same pattern. The same happens with other wods like pronouns The most common one: This /these I was impressed when all this crimes happened instead of these crimes. But the same happens using the verbs: there is 3 seasons We need to write there are Please pay attention. From now on this is going to be M4
THE: It is only used in english when it is specific. Never if it is generic. If we talk about education, in spanish we say la educación.... but never in english. Examples of mistakes you have made: It is a good TV series fo r the teenagers The technology has entered in our life Although the education is really important.... From now on, you will find M3 in my corrections.
Pay attention to see if you are writing in the present or the past and stick to the verbal tense you have decided: Mistakes: I was impressed when all these crimes happen She doesn’t appeared Corrected: I was impressed when all these crimes happened She doesn’t appear/ She didn't appear Or When you decide to put the past to an infinitive instead of the verb (double mistake): Mistake: She decide to learned C orrected She decid ed to learn From now on if you have a mistake in a verbal tense I am going to write M2